[PPL-devel] w3ppl/About About.raw

[P M Hill]

I am just looking at this and changing the english a bit.

but wrt "handful" in:

The course ran from October 2000 to mid June 2001,
and was taken by a handful of good (undergraduate) students:
Sara Bonini, Andrea Pescetti, Elisa Ricci, and Tatiana Zolo
(more on <A HREF="@ROOT at People">PeoPLe</A>).

this is a strange way to talk about a group of "good" students! ;)
You (Roberto) must have big hands! ;)
It is not really wrong, but...
Could I change it to "four" or a "few" or "several"?
Maybe, better and more expressively "a select group".

ciao,
  Pat
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On Fri, 8 Jun 2001, Roberto Bagnara wrote:

> CVSROOT:	/usr/local/cvsroot
> Module name:	w3ppl
> Changes by:	roberto at spartacus.cs.unipr.it	01/06/08 11:45:07
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> Modified files:
> 	About          : About.raw 
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> Log message:
> 	About page drafted.
> 	Pat, can you please make it look like English?
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